The best part of me!! Shay

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The best part of me  

The best part of me is my elbow because if I did not have my elbow I could not eat, sleep, run, swim, have fun, climb, carry stuff and much more. If I couldn't carry stuff I wouldn't be able to carry my plate to the kitchen I wouldn't be able to rock climb and that means having fun. Having fun also includes swimming and running I wouldn't be able to swim because I bend my arms when I do freestyle and much more swimming styles. I wouldn't be able to run because I bend my arms near my hips when I run. I couldn't eat because I can't bring my hand to my mouth and that means I would starve to death. I wouldn't be able to sleep because I bend my arms and I put my hands under my head when I sleep, I wouldn't be able to do any of those things without my elbow that's why I love my elbows

By Shay

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Little animals - By carys

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Little animals

There once were 2 friends, one was a rat, who was really fat. The other was a deer who was friends with the bat. As a butterfly flew right past, a really big cheater came running fast. A really smart owl snoring away, and a Kangaroo bouncing all day. A giraffe as tall as a tree, and collecting nectar is a honey bee. A poisonous snake slithering through, and a patterned cow saying moo! it got dark the moon shone bright. Everyone went to bed and turned out the light. Little animals, Good night!

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Writing - By Devynee

10:11 Anonymous 3 Comments


Turtles.

Are turtles and tortoises the same?

People are often confused between the two. The big difference between turtles and tortoises, is that turtles are mainly water based where as tortoises dwell on land. Turtles are known as reptiles. There are 400 species of turtle and some species are known as pets but the majority of the species are wild and mainly live in the ocean.

Here are some facts/info you need to know about turtles if you want to get one.

Appearance
The appearance is based on it's looks and uniqueness. Its body is straight and slightly bumpy. Its shell is tall and delicate because if you try and smash it, it may break if you smash hard enough. It has long slightly curved arms that are used to help them swim while hunting for food.They have flippers that can help them swim and crawl away. Turtles have not very sharp teeth but they can still eat very rock solid things. Turtles have very unusual things about them but that is what makes them unique.

Habitat
Turtles usually enjoy living in tropical environments where it is hot. Most turtles spend their days in the water but at night they come to shores on some tropical beaches in countries like Chile and Argentina located in South America. Turtles prefer to nest on warm beaches usually hidden from danger. Turtles can live in any ocean of the world. They spend most of their lives in the sea because that's where they can feed and live.
Only the females come to shore on beaches when they nest.Some turtles seek out on land away to hide from danger and from getting hurt

Protection
Turtles are an endangered species and in order for them not to become extinct they need a lot of protection from harmful predators. Their main protection is the strength of their hard shell. When turtles sense danger they pull their head into their shell for protection. Humans are very harmful to turtles because then people are fishing and let nets into the oceans some turtles get caught in the nets. This is where turtles can't protect themselves. Protection is one of the main parts in their lives so it doesn't kill them and so if the turtles get in anymore danger they will have some strength to save themselves.

Diet
Wild turtles eat a lot of water based plants, but also eat a fair amount of sea insects, sea worms and even dead marine life. Protein from all of these food sources is very important for a wild turtle and they need to grow in order to maintain long survival. But the species of turtle does depend on the diet, for example sea turtles feed on sea based food where as green sea turtles mainly feed on vegetation. But most wild sea turtles feed on meat when they are young and as they age feed on more plants and vegetation.

You may not of been aware of some things at the start but you might be now. Humans should look after turtles and protect them because they are important like all other animals in nature. So if you want to buy a turtle then you need to take good care of him or her.


These are about the body parts and what they do to it live.







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Mia's blog post

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Tittle: Mia's blog profflile

In cybersmart we wrote a blog proffile about ourselfs. We needed to do this because we wanted other people to know more about our selves. 

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the secret cave

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The secret cave

Chapter 1:The amazing find
One day the three sisters Inayah,Lily,Maddie were playing in their secret hideout the farm's old shed . Then Inayah spotted something suspicious a cave that had never been there before. She knew it because they were born in that farm yard and Inayah wanted to explore it.  Inayah told Maddie and Lily and they both agreed on exploring that mysterious cave.They all got their horses. Inayah's horse  Rose , Maddie's horse Anna and lily's horse Ashleigh. They also packed some vegetables from the farm yard and took a deep breathe and went into the cave. They all turned on there flashlight and that is when lily spotted something amazing: dinosaur fossils.
Chapter 2:Ouch
She showed them to Maddie  and Inayah they looked amazing so they decided to take pictures of them and go further on in the cave.It got darker and darker. That is when Maddie fell off her horse. " Oh no"! said lily and Inayah together. Maddie had a sore ankle. Inayah saw a cast in her bag and it fitted Maddie's ankle. To make sure Maddie will not fall of her horse again, Lily hooked Anna to Ashleigh and safely transferred Maddie onto Ashleigh.
Chapter 3:The small hole
As they went deeper into the tunnel Inayah saw coins on the she told maddie and Lily and they decided we should follow it soon they came to a little big enough  for the girls to fit through but they had to leave the horses behind, but there was a problem Maddie could not walk with a sore a ankle. So they asked Maddie how she feels and she said even worst.
Chapter 4:The fairy
Suddenly a voice came from behind us and it was a little fairy and it said your father came in this cave a long time ago and badly hurt just like Maddie and if he finds out he will be very disappointed.There is one way of letting not letting your father know is the gold flower find it in the star's and if you choose correct you will receive the gold flower.
Chapter 5: The one who goes ahead
There is one more thing one of you must stay behind now quickly decide. I should stay behind ouch said maddie. Okay said Lily and Inayah together. Now Inayah and Lily went in front they. Now remember just a little bit more walking and one more of you has to stay behind so decide quickly. I think you should go said Lily to Inayah. No I think you should go said Inayah to lily. Rock paper scissors. Lily wins she has to go.
Chapter 6: The golden flower.
Now Lily your sisters have chosen you but the question is will you make the right choice said the fairy. I hope so said Lily.So do you know your stars properly. Not really said Lily to the fairy. So you have to find the southern cross. Oh the southern cross I see that every night said Lily.This will be harder because every single star is in this sky. Is it that one. Look something is falling from the sky it is the golden flower. Yes said lily.
Chapter 7:The ride home
Lily and Inayah raced back to maddie and quickly said we found the golden flower but maddie was already healed ah this is magic. Oh No said lily it is nearly dinner time. They rushed home. Ah we made it just in time. Oh good you girls are back time for dinner. They kept the secret all to themselves for ever.

The End
By Inayah

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free writing blog post

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The adventures of Yinon and Danny

Once in the land of pokemon there were two trainers named Danny and Yinon. The two boys had the same pokemon pikachu. The two trainers found the master ball jackpot with 100 collectable master balls (master balls are the best balls in the pokemon universe). The trainers were happy because Yinon caught a charizard level 96. The two battled and trained in the gyms of auckland and wellington and all of New zealand and want to go all around the world.

Yinon and Danny were running away from another charizard that was weak. It was level 33 charizard. Yinon's charizard officially could mega evolve into mega charizard!. Yinon was so happy with his charizard and Danny's pikachu was evolving. Danny was so excited that it was going into it's final evolution. Danny and Yinon were so excited that the pokemon were evolving for once. The two boys were feeling great. Yinon caught a Mewtwo and an Alakazam. Yinon and Danny went to get a haircut and groom a pokemon.

It was nighttime and they booked a hotel at Wellington and went to sleep. In the morning the two boys went to go and train in a virtual world. Yinon completed it and was waiting for Danny. Danny was very happy when he completed the virtual world. Danny and Yinon went back home after having a wonderful day.

The end

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How to make a purswasve piece of writing

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How to make a piece of purswasve writing
​
What persuasive writing is .
It is a piece of writing that you can make someone agree on what you agree


What you need:
  • An idea for what you want or what you don't want
  • Someone to persuade it to

  • 3 points why you need it or why you don't need it

  • You need to add an detail so you can persuade them easily




Follow this success criteria for gidince
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How to make it/do it:
  1. Make a good title, But don't make 3 long sentences just make it nice and simple title

  1. Make a good detailed introduction e.g. I strongly believe that i should get a ____ or I strongly believe that i shouldn't have  ____ forever.

  1. Start your first point

  1. Then after you have finished that point start your second point

  1. When you have done that  one make your last point

  1. Then when you have finished that last point make your conclusion/summary

  1. Then  refine your work by following the success criteria

  1. Then you show or send the writing you made to the person you are persuading it to



That is how you make piece of persuasive writing.
By Ana.L






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How to make a purswasve piece of writing

09:56 Anonymous 0 Comments

How to make a piece of purswasve writing
​
What persuasive writing is .
It is a piece of writing that you can make someone agree on what you agree


What you need:
  • An idea for what you want or what you don't want

  • Someone to persuade it to

  • 3 points why you need it or why you don't need it

  • You need to add an detail so you can persuade them easily




Follow this success criteria for gidince
Screenshot 2016-07-02 at 1.13.42 PM.png


How to make it/do it:
  1. Make a good title, But don't make 3 long sentences just make it nice and simple title

  1. Make a good detailed introduction e.g. I strongly believe that i should get a ____ or I strongly believe that i shouldn't have  ____ forever.

  1. Start your first point

  1. Then after you have finished that point start your second point

  1. When you have done that  one make your last point

  1. Then when you have finished that last point make your conclusion/summary

  1. Then  refine your work by following the success criteria

  1. Then you show or send the writing you made to the person you are persuading it to



That is how you make piece of persuasive writing.
By Ana.L






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Explanation Writing

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WALHT: communicate why something is important (Explanation)


Why do children learn to swim


This explanation is about why children need to do swimming. Here is Four reasons why...


My first reason it is important to swim is so you get exercise. If you don't get exercise you will feel sore pane somewhere in your body. For example, your back could start hurting. Exercise also helps you to get stronger and then you can carry things.


My second reason it is important to swim is to have swimming lessons so then you won't drown. So if you don,t do swimming lesson you will have to swim with someone and would have to  swim somewhere where there's life guards. You also learn skills of swimming so if you are tied you can just float on your back

My third reason it is important to learn to swim is if a wild animal is chasing you. You would need to get to safety.this is important so then a wild Animal won't kill you You could jump in the water because cats like lions don't like to go in the water and you could swim to safety.

My last reason is it is important to learn to swim to have fun.It is fun to swim because you can splash around at each other and look under the water at the fish and diffrent shells For example, if  You don,t want to swim then all the time when your friends want to go hung out at the sea or go to the swimming pools you can't go because you can't swim. They might laugh at you as well.

Click here to see natasha writing. It might help with your writing


Tips:

Paragraph titles: (How you have done it)

Exercise

Lessons/Drowning

An animal chasing you/being able to swim to safety.

Having fun with friends/ hanging out

Paragraph titles: (The way the plan was)

Fun - Join in when you play with friends/swimming with sea animals.

Safety - fall off a boat - swimming skills/drown.

Exercise - full body exercise/helps with sport
Reflect - look a the ideas highlighted in green. For each small idea e.g 'full body exercise' will have it's on paragraphing  and 'helps with sports will have it's own paragraph. Even though they are under the same sub-title. Look at my writing if you don't understand what i'm saying.

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Autumn Poem

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Leaves are fluttering to the ground from the tree branches tall and brown, This Autumn night is very bright and makes me want to dance tonight, on an Autumn day the sun shines bright on you and me this Autumn light.  By: Shay A 💗
😉😶😆🍁🍂

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Autumn poem By: Shay!!

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Leaves are fluttering to the ground from the tree branches tall and brown, This Autumn night is very bright and makes me want to dance tonight, on an Autumn day the sun shines bright on you and me this Autumn light.  By: Shay A 💗
😉😶😆🍁🍂

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Colour Poem

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Color Poem
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  • yellow makes me feel like it is summer
  • yellow makes me think about the beach and the water in summer
  • yellow burns my feet when i walk across the path way in summer
  • yellow makes me feel like i am at the beach
  • yellow makes me think of the hot hot burning sun
  • yellow makes me feel like it is atem with all the yellow lifesImage result for yellow

  • black and yellow makes me think of bees
  • black and yellow makes me feel like the world is only yellow and black
  • yellow and black smells like bees


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Image result for black
  • black makes me think of the scary forest
  • black feels like it is winter
  • black makes me feel of racing cars wheels racing across the road
  • black makes me think about my computer case
  • black makes me feel like it is night time
  • black makes me want to play in the rain with all the black clouds and sky






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All About Me

09:54 Anonymous 1 Comments



ALL ABOUT ME

Hi my name is ethan i am 9 years old at the moment.I go to stonefields school.My eyes are as brown as choccolate my skin colour is as dark as a dark tree trunk.My hair is as black as night and i have a earing just like my favourite soccer player!

I like playing video games and my favourite video game is FIFA! it is the best game ever! my favourite movie is the ronaldo movie it is a soccer movie.I am CRAZY about soccer it is my favourite sport.
I am fast and I like to play sports.I have a ps4 and a wii u.

My friends are Euan,Jayden,Harry,Thajay,Hussam,Danny,Sukhpreet,Dh
evan,Loeki,Oliver And much more We are good friends because we have similar personalities.

my favourite foods are lamb chops,fish and chips,fish burger and chicken and rice.
My favourite car is a lamboghini.my mum has the x1 it has purple lights and inside the car it has orange lights.1 day i am going to be a famous soccer player and then I will have a lamboghini.

THE END

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