By Zoe holder

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WALHT: communicate why something is important (Persuasive)


Scooting at School should be Banned.


This persuasive writing is about why children should not be able to scoter at school here is Three reasons why...

My first reason why scootering should be banned is because at breaktime you might want to walk to the playground by going through the courts. Here is another reason why scotting should be band is when you're walking somewhere a scooter might go over your foot and it might really hurt. for example you are walking to the playground and then someone goes over your foot.


My second reason why scootering should be banned is because if lots of people were scootering maybe someone bangs into the other person and then there would be lots of people going to the sick bay. For example someone was looking somewhere else and the other person was to and then they banged into each other.
My Last reason why scootering should be banned is because if you are playing on your scoter and someone also wants to play with you. But that person didn't have a scooter.for example you were waiting for your friend and when they arrive they just want to go on there scoter. It would not be nice because you have to run



I think that you can go to school on your scooter but you have to go to the main entrance and put your scooter there or you can put your scooter where the other place you can park your scooter.

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